Alan, for me personally, the blown out lights really add to the photo. Add to that the light coming from the upper right, and I think it's great. I love it just the way it is; well done!
Alan, Super Moody Shot With A Tinge Of Fright Factor! I Can Picture Some Crazy Dude Emerging From The Light With A Chainsaw!:biggrin:! Great Shot!
Cool shot. One thing you might try is to meter the lights and then wait until the ambient light balances with it and then take the image. I have had good luck with that method.