Air time... is this working??? please give me some feedback on the idea..

[Flyfishdk]

Hi all

I made this series of pictures of my "house" model Natalie last night. I just not sure if it's working... I really have mixed feelings about this.. I don't know why but there is somthing...

Please give me your opinion about it

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and her a pic of the setup... 1 big bowens flashhead with a beautydisc and a SB900

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[dx379]

I like them - really cool idea. Is it just me or is there a masking problem on the very first one on her foot?

Jonny

 

[Medic1210]

I really dig the second from the last one, holding the umbrella. Cool concept. You pulled it off well.

 

[cr2596]

Make #3 look like #1, and you may have a winner.

 

[Red1]

That is very cool! Both in concept and the way you pulled it off.

 

[TRock]

Agreed with CR2596.
Creative setup and original idea.

 

[TOLady]

Now that is a great series. Well thought out, and executed. Kudos to you. I'll bet she was almost ready to toss her cookies after THAT photoshoot. :smile:

 

[Smason]

I really like what you've done here. I especially like the one with the umbrella, nice work

 

[LauraJohnston]

I like it better in color where you can see the colors of dusk. I feel like there's too much going on in the umbrella one.. with the patterns on the umbrella and dress and the stars. I think you could take this idea with an umbrella though.. maybe a solid color like red or something? I'm not sure if it's possible but if you could get her higher in the frame, I think the composition would look better. Anyway, I like these.

 

[danny_eva_01]

All I know is that #4 is great! I prefer the color ones.

 

[Paintguru]

I like #4 and prefer the color ones.

 

[little big man]

Kudos for a great concept in addition to doing it so well on the first try!

Sean

 

[Hagen]

wow very cool Idea you got going on.

 

[zivilyn861]

Very well done! I definitely prefer the color ones--seems to lend a lot more mood to the shot for me.

 

[Koran]

I like 2 & 3. For some reason I didnt like the facial expression or lightness on the umbrella one. I feel like if she was looking up or if there was less light on her face, I dont know, cant put my finger on it but my fav is 3.

 

[heball]

#1 reminded me of the parable of biblical ascension with her focus into the heavenly light with a smile upon her face. #2 seemed to take me into a theatre setting, #3 reminded me of tossing and turning on my pillow at night, only she's turning in the clouds. They're all great shots! They truly allow the imagination to flow. Outstanding!

 

[lf911sc]

Prefer the color shots, just seem to work better.

Something about the umbrella, too Mary Poppins?

 

[Matt S]

Yes it's working very well. Good concept.

 

[ABrownPhoto]

I think these are great. Personally 3 and 4 are much better than the first two, but I am unsure if it is because I prefer color vs B/W or the poses.... but I'd say this idea works!

Thanks for the setup shot!

 

[OldRedFox]

#4 is inspired. Can I use it?