I do wish there was a bit more at the top and a bit less at the left, removing that junction box that makes it obvious that that 'ledge' is a wire channel and thus adds too much reality to the image.
Considering how much if the content is in the upper right, one could crop the image, preserving the feeling without losing much if anything.
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Thank you everyone. Lew, I appreciate your valid suggestions. I wish I had a little more "breathing" room at the top, but oftentimes, in the middle of a group shoot, you have to shoot faster than you want to.
Excellent ethereal/emotional Image. I'm drawn in to complete the "story" which I always love with this type image. I see you are open to critque....the only thing I can say is I'd probably try it as a B&W to see how it looks. Hmm, after looking at it again the tone is growing on me. At any rate, congrats on an excellent fine art image.