Critique Boxeo

Discussion in 'Sports Photography' started by the_traveler, Nov 14, 2017.

  1. Before I write the text for this story on my site, I'd like to get some views to see if teh storyline is clear

    TIA for looking and any comments.


    Slideshow Boxeo
     
  2. Walter

    Walter

    Jan 13, 2006
    Columbia, Maryland
    Walter Rowe
    I see some boxers training. I don’t read anything more into it than that. The opening and closing images outside the training arena don’t add anything to it for me. It is missing context and I don’t feel a sense of conclusion when I get to the end. I don’t get a sense of high intensity or energy in the sparring. Not trying to be harsh. I’m just writing what I feel (or wish I felt).
     
  3. West

    West

    Jan 2, 2012
    Vancouver BC
    I like it ... gritty (y) Reminds of a place "Rocky's Gym" that a friend of mine used to train at.

    I guess you could have slowed down the shutter somewhat and got fist-trails, but I got the mood regardless.
     
    Last edited: Nov 22, 2017 at 9:12 PM
  4. To me, it's not so much of a story line as it is a nice depiction of some...can I say...primitive...training in another country. And I'm assuming it is another country from the images. I like it, and it makes me think that I should travel more.