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the other thread was too long to get any more input

so here is me taking everything that was posted in that thread and using it the the best i could.

please tell me what you think

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I really like your concept. My only suggestion/ opinion is to make your web address, name & email a little smaller font and center justified. I'd stck it at the bottom in a group to anchor the composition, maybe in the order of name, email, web address.
 
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I really like your concept. My only suggestion/ opinion is to make your web address, name & email a little smaller font and center justified. I'd stck it at the bottom in a group to anchor the composition, maybe in the order of name, email, web address.
okay more like this?

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I am no expert but maybe a different font for bottom info and maybe a bit smaller yet. I love the image and the title, but it seems to be getting lost in the shuffle
 
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I am no expert but maybe a different font for bottom info and maybe a bit smaller yet. I love the image and the title, but it seems to be getting lost in the shuffle
Like this?

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I dont like the way the company name intrudes over the eye, Id just have this "straight" at the top

I think white text would work better too

If you have top line www.wideshutphotography.com then you dont need your web URL either

No phone number ?

Make email address font 50% of your name too
 
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I dont like the way the company name intrudes over the eye, Id just have this "straight" at the top

I think white text would work better too

If you have top line www.wideshutphotography.com then you dont need your web URL either

No phone number ?

Make email address font 50% of your name too
very good points...straight lines...clean..simple...the less clutter the better
 
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I dont like the way the company name intrudes over the eye, Id just have this "straight" at the top

I think white text would work better too

If you have top line www.wideshutphotography.com then you dont need your web URL either

No phone number ?

Make email address font 50% of your name too
so like this

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HAHA JUST KIDDING, i'm a very creative person...... hard to stay simple for me, but i'm trying

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caps are good the way you have it

make sure you align the writing on the left hand margin
change the font so the email address is 50% your name
add your phone number
 
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very good points...straight lines...clean..simple...the less clutter the better
caps are good the way you have it

make sure you align the writing on the left hand margin
change the font so the email address is 50% your name
add your phone number
can do i was warned about cliping in my other thread. how do I align but protect from this?
 
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version 4-3-1

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Andrew, are you making a business out of photography or is it more of a hobby?

IMO I think that font is too smooth for the background image. I'd recommend looking at http://www.dafont.com/ for some sharper/more professional fonts.
It's a hobby that found interest. LOL - shooting HS sports

I also noticed the parents felt better when I talked with them and gave them my web address.

so these are just to make it easy and maby make a few bucks on the side......
 
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front to crazy? I like it ans you can read it :cool:

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I like this font much better, edgier & more creative. IMO I still think the size of your name & the phone # should be a bit smaller, maybe more like the email address.
 
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