Citrus Punch: 2nd and last crops added!

Discussion in 'Film Forum' started by W.Ray, Apr 19, 2007.

  1. Recent shot, from a couple of weeks ago.

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  2. Chris101

    Chris101

    Feb 2, 2005
    Arizona
    This colors of this photo induce an 'otherwhere' feeling in me Ray. The big X at the bottom could cut the scene in quadrants, but the bar at the top blocks it from doing that. When I crop it out by scrolling down, I really like this picture!
     
  3. Chris, my thoughts exactly. Right after I posted this I knew it needed cropping. As usual, suggestions and critiques are always welcome. Is this better?

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  4. gavin

    gavin

    555
    Oct 21, 2006
    I instantly thought of cropping too!

    I'd crop just a bit more, so as to not see any white at all at the top.
     
  5. Okay, here it goes again!

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  6. Chris101

    Chris101

    Feb 2, 2005
    Arizona
    Poifect!
     
  7. Yep, the 2nd crop works very well Ray..........

    Great colour and depth in this photograph............ reminds me of a Challenge entry last year where I shot the image of the man, slightly blurred, walking past a huge window display with a photograph of fruit displayed........... if you don't remember it........... here's a link.

    http://afs.smugmug.com/gallery/1615232#96742472-L-LB

    Great shot my friend!

    G
     
  8. Graeme, for some reason I don't think my shot is quite as dynamic and graphic as yours! Sweet picture, by the by, literally and figuratively! I hope you printed that one.
     
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