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Discussion in 'Formal Portraits and Weddings' started by ERAUGrad04, Aug 13, 2008.

  1. ERAUGrad04

    ERAUGrad04

    271
    Jan 15, 2008
    IL
    I am looking for some critique on lighting on this shot. My wife was kind enough to pose for me while I played around with some CLS shooting.

    Shooting info: D40x Nikkor 17-55 2.8 SB-600 camera left with Stofen Diffuser ISO 200
    55mm
    f/4
    Flash fired Manual 1/16

    DSC_3875-small.

    Thanks for looking and the honest critque!

    Morgan
     
  2. Pretty lady, nice teeth, lovely eyes.... :biggrin: ......my wife has the same necklace - and bracelet :rolleyes: 

    Her pose is a little awkward and I dont like the way her hands are twisted up by her face. I have a gripe about the shadow on the hat but if her head were more vertical, that wouldn't be an issue.

    You have a beautiful and seemingly willing model so take some more with the hat off and try a more flattering pose. :wink:
     
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