Thanks. For some reason, the entire image is a bit soft. When working with the RAW files. Everything is tack sharp. When I resized, unsharpen then saved it in JPG (10), the entire image lost it's sharpness.
I think it is a great shot. her eyes are very sharp and the colors are very good! the only thing I would say, is that you should make a third crop. keep it the same as your updated one, but crop it about half an inch to an inch below the tops of her shoulders.