Escape Plan

[GBRandy]

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[Trailfinder]

Hey - I don't know what it is - - - - But I kinda like that one just the way it is....

Brad G...
OKC/OKLA

 

[Gale]

I like the original

 

[GBRandy]

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[eng45ine]

Your concept is very good, the fire service preachs to children and their parents to have a special meeting place in the event of a fire. In your example, a swing out on the tree is a great landmark for the family to key into in the event that they need to evacuate and re-group in a safe place.

 

[Markb]

Randy,

Good concept. Just a thought if you were thinking of the picture as an educational tool: what about a white border around the picture (with a thinner black border possibly) with the "Got a Plan" tagline below, with maybe a question in smaller type below "when this happens to you, do you know what to do?".

JMHO.

Good shot BTW.

 

[BostonRott]

I like everything but the font, it appears weak in this photo. I'd go with something a bit more standard. :smile:

 

[dmwphoto]

Excellent concept. What will be the outlet for this work?