Escape Plan

Discussion in 'Photojournalism, Candids and Street Photography' started by GBRandy, May 8, 2007.

  1. GBRandy

    GBRandy

    Feb 28, 2006
    Green Bay, WI
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  2. Trailfinder

    Trailfinder Guest

    Hey - I don't know what it is - - - - But I kinda like that one just the way it is....

    Brad G...
    OKC/OKLA
     
  3. Gale

    Gale

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    Jan 26, 2005
    Viera Fl
    I like the original
     
  4. GBRandy

    GBRandy

    Feb 28, 2006
    Green Bay, WI
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  5. eng45ine

    eng45ine

    May 11, 2005
    Chicago, IL
    Your concept is very good, the fire service preachs to children and their parents to have a special meeting place in the event of a fire. In your example, a swing out on the tree is a great landmark for the family to key into in the event that they need to evacuate and re-group in a safe place.
     
  6. Randy,

    Good concept. Just a thought if you were thinking of the picture as an educational tool: what about a white border around the picture (with a thinner black border possibly) with the "Got a Plan" tagline below, with maybe a question in smaller type below "when this happens to you, do you know what to do?".

    JMHO.

    Good shot BTW.
     
  7. I like everything but the font, it appears weak in this photo. I'd go with something a bit more standard. :smile:
     
  8. Excellent concept. What will be the outlet for this work?
     
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