A family friend asked me to take sr. portraits for them. I was originally only going to take my daughter's, but thought it would be good practice. Pretty standard fare, no exotic poses...but I'm interested in C&C to learn. I haven't taken my daughter's yet...Overall, she asked me to 'warm' up her skin, she has very pale skin and didn't want it so white. So if you think it's too warm, let me know. On a couple, I've tried only warming her face...not here tho'. EXIF is intact, they actually are in reverse order from time taken. I'm not sure why I was at F11 for some, most of the shots were w/ my 70-200, 85f1.4. I also tried my 35f2 and 50f1.4. 1. Her fave, open doorway so light fell off. I have some others where I lit behind her but she liked this one best. I whitened her teeth and whites of her eyes. Shoot thru umbrella @ 5 o'clock and one @ 10 o'clock. 2. Gold reflector behind her to camera right, fill flash thru umbrella to left. Would you darken the areas between the bars, above her right ear, and would you extend the shadow on the wooden beam so it's all in shadow? Whitened teeth. 3. Gold reflector to camera left, and fill flash camera left as well. Whitened teeth. 4. Two shoot thru umbrellas 7 and 4 o'clock. No teeth whitening, as well as next one. 5. One umbrella, 7 o'clock.