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I'd love to see the shot in color and slightly desaturated if the skin tones aren't as pleasing as you might like. I've done that before and had good results. With this pose, you might try the blouse a little higher or lower to show the arm separation. To me her shoulder is a bit too flat and needs some shadow or something break it up.