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Help and advice please

Discussion in 'Retouching and Post Processing' started by RayGuselli, Sep 25, 2008.

  1. RayGuselli

    RayGuselli

    Oct 18, 2005
    I somehow like this image BUT

    1. would you crop it and if so, where?

    2. Would you make into a complete silhouette?

    Would appreciate ideas and advice

    Thanks

    Ray

    [​IMG]
     
  2. i'd leave it. it looks good the way it is :) 
     
  3. +1 for leaving.
     
  4. LindaZ

    LindaZ

    Jul 29, 2007
    Wilmington, NC
    Ray, I would crop it as she is either riding out of the picture, or riding in to the picture. The rider is a little bit too centered right now to make it interesting, imo.

    Also, the crop is slightly too square...once again I think you would tell more of a story if the crop was more rectangular.

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  5. sjlarue

    sjlarue

    Nov 18, 2007
    OH-IO
    Hey Ray, This is what I would do:

    1. Cropped kind of like Linda's.
    2. Ran NeatImage on the sunset part to the sunset to mesh the colors(but a regular blur would probably do it, I was just playing around with my new toy.
    3. Reduced exposure on subject and FG to make it more of a silhouette.

    p1010404.
    DMC-TZ5    ---    7mm    f/3.9    1/320s    ISO 100

    ...

    After I did that and put it online, I thought that it needed help in the color sat deptment so I opened the new file in ACR and boosted the vibance and saturation sliders by 10 and the recovery slider a little.:

    p10104041.
    DMC-TZ5    ---    7mm    f/3.9    1/320s    ISO 100


    Hope this helps.
     
  6. RayGuselli

    RayGuselli

    Oct 18, 2005
    Linda and Steve

    I really like both of these and a good call re centering etc...

    Love the more vibrant colour...

    Appreciate the feedback.....think I like this way!

    Best wishes

    Ray
     
  7. I like Lindas crop ....... not sure about boosting the saturation etc.

    Best,
     
  8. sjlarue

    sjlarue

    Nov 18, 2007
    OH-IO
    To me and my screen, it looked to be a little blue, so I wanted to bring the orange out. So that's why I boosted the saturation and vibrance. It could just be my screen, but that's the way it looked.
     
  9. RayGuselli

    RayGuselli

    Oct 18, 2005
    My attempt

    Been working on it and so far have this......

    Trying to take on board the help and advice others have kindly given,

    Thank you

    Ray

    [​IMG]
     
  10. zeus1

    zeus1

    126
    Dec 14, 2006
    Belgium
    Two variations on the same theme:

    p565641535-4.

    Recrop. Set black point on riders hat. Hiraloam sharpening. Increasing light in shadow parts. All done in Lightzone. Aftwerwards noise reduction with nik Dfine (noise reduction in Lightzone VERY basic) and high pass filtering in CS3.

    [​IMG]

    The same as above + B/W variation using nik Silver Efex Pro.

    Comments and critiques welcome (just donned my asbestos suite) :smile:
     
  11. donw5288

    donw5288 Guest

    Ray,
    I liked the original, but then I also liked the way LindaZ cropped the image. Very good point about making it more interesting.
     
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