I would like some C&C on these please

Discussion in 'Miscellany' started by Skittledoo, Jul 6, 2008.

  1. A series of a my most recent few from the past couple days...

    I'm still learning a lot about photography and would really like some C&C.

    #1. This one was meant to be simple... I call it "One light to shine for all"... I took this picture on the 4th of July at a Manassas festival in Virginia
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    #2. I really have no clue how to photograph fireworks so I decided to use this past 4th of July to experiment... This photo wasn't exactly what I was looking for when I innitially started shooting, but I kind of like how it turned out.
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    #3. Here's another fireworks one... still... not what I was hoping to get out of this shoot... but still like it
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    #4. This one is actually one of my favorites. I was standing outside and a bunch of people were setting off fireworks. The smoke was coming through the trees giving off a really cool cloudy appearance. My friend Stef was over by the trees and created a sillouhette (spelling?)
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    *more*
     
  2. #5. I saw these birds hanging outside my friend's house
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    #6. Really simple... this one is the Manassas tower
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    #7. Light post
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    #8. Smile
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    *done*
     
  3. Sorry to give you only a few lines of feedback when you've asked for critique as I don't have the time right now.

    However, I just wanted to let you know, that the fireworks shots #2 and #3 are very nice IMHO, and if I would've taken #4, I would print it large and hang it on the wall.

    I wish I remember to get back when I've some time to give some real feedback.
     
  4. Zee71

    Zee71

    Apr 1, 2007
    Queens, NY
    #2 and especially #4 do it for me.....nice work!
     
  5. JoJo2Fast

    JoJo2Fast

    Nov 20, 2007
    Auburn, WA
    Yeah I agree, #4 definitely needs to be printed and framed in your house.
     
  6. papah

    papah

    28
    May 5, 2007
    Seattle
    #4 is a great shot! It could be the end of the world...