It's a good image Greg, but for me the angled iron bar doesn't work too well.
Angled picture elements can do certain things for an image: it's sometimes said that a bottom left to top right angle can give a sense of dynamism and a top left to bottom right gives a sense of tranquility. And of course an angled element like a road or a fence can lead the eye into the image. The iron bar here doesn't seem to lead to or from anything.
This is a nice try. You have use DOF to somewhat isolate the broken down tombstone; however, the interest is not high there either. If it were laying on its back where you could read the lettering it would be better. I know you had to work with what you had but sometimes we just need to pass the shot by. To me at least there is nothing in this image that I would call a center of interest.