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Discussion in 'Formal Portraits and Weddings' started by Connahhh, Sep 6, 2008.

  1. Connahhh

    Connahhh

    Oct 27, 2007
    NH
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    Strobist Info:

    One SB-800 on the left, 1/32nd. One SB-800 on the right, 1/64th. Shoot through umbrellas.

    CRIT! :smile:
     
  2. isayx3

    isayx3

    Apr 12, 2008
    Corona, Ca
    I like em...face is kind of pale (white)...im guessing because of the makeup..other than that..very nice.
     
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  3. Wow, Connor! Great shots of a beautiful subject.

    EDIT: I wish I could figure out something to crit... but honestly these are really really nice. Perhaps I would like to see more of the camera on the 3rd, and you might consider darkening her belly area on the 2nd because it pops unnecessarily a bit now (she may think it makes her look fat - I know some girls who would - absolutely without a reason, of course).
     
  4. Very pretty girl, some nice shots! great expression too.

    Thanks for sharing

    Darrell
     
  5. Connahhh

    Connahhh

    Oct 27, 2007
    NH
    Thanks Darrell!

    Haha, thanks Jani. That's good to hear. I agree on both accounts. The question is... which for POTD? :smile:

    They were, Charlie!

    Thanks. She's just naturally pale. It doesn't bother me very much.
     
  6. Oh, one more thing. Perhaps swapping the #3 and #2 in the 1st would work even better?

    I would use the 2nd as the POTD because it shows more emotion :smile:
     
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