more prom pictures !

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this past weekend i took some pictures of my gf's sister. i was pressed for time once again because women love to take their time on getting ready and running late :biggrin:
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feedback is always welcomed !!! good, the bad, and the ugly !!! :biggrin:
 
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Few quick observations:

Number 1: Use of a diffuser panel on her right side would have been helpful. For me at least, the highlights on her right side and the way they fall seem to move focus from her face to her breast.

Number 2: I like it, but the angle or intended tilt doesn't work for me.

Number 3: Nice capture of a special moment. I like it.

Number 4: I like it. Great location with the light shadows creating visual interest. Perhaps clone out whatever is on the ceiling just before the arch and also the switch plate oR whatever it is on the back wall to his right.

Number 5: The only thing I don't like is the left side background. The way you cropped it, draws some focus to this negative space. But this negative space has a red fire hydrant, yellow utility pole guide wire cover, a very bright roof, blue house, etc. Perhaps a different crop?
 
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thanks for the feedback randy !
after the first picture i started using a reflector :biggrin:
2- its actually the rail that is going down like that. i couldn't shoot it at another arch because of the sun.
4. i'll start looking into cloning small things out. i rarely pay attention to cloning small things like that.
 

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