First, welcome to the Cafe! It's nice to have you here.
Cute picture to be sure. But there were three things I noticed. First, as Gary mentioned, it is a little dark. And second, the horizon is tilted...not that much, but just enought that I noticed. Last, your subjects are right in the middle of the photo..sometimes it helps to move them off-center a bit.
I hope you don't mind, but I did some tweaks in Photoshop to your image. I will take this down immediately if you desire.
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Do you have any more? I love youth hockey, and I'll bet you have some great action shots of those darling kids!