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I am interested in what others say as I have no experience in this field. But I will give it a go. I think the lighting is very well done. It is nothing dramatic but it does shows the product well which is what you want. I do like the clean bg more than the first two and I think you should not have the sunscreen centered. I especially do not like the vertical "thing" in the second one.

Very well done though.
 
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I am interested in what others say as I have no experience in this field. But I will give it a go. I think the lighting is very well done. It is nothing dramatic but it does shows the product well which is what you want. I do like the clean bg more than the first two and I think you should not have the sunscreen centered. I especially do not like the vertical "thing" in the second one.

Very well done though.

Thanks
 
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Good to see that you're still making product shots.

I had to study the first photo to determine which object is the primary subject being promoted. The basket caught my eye first because of its prominent position, because it's the largest object in the scene, and because the near part of it is perfectly in focus. When I realized the basket couldn't possibly be the primary subject, I looked throughout the image and discovered that the primary subject is on the far right. I doubt that you want the viewer to have to go through those mental gyrations to figure all of that out.
 
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With the first image, my eye goes immediately to the basket with the bath brush, and then over to the product. Maybe arrange the basket so that's it's more in the backrgound?

The others are awesome, in my opinion - well done!
 
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Good effort...It is well exposed, but my eyes bounced back and forth between the basket and the actual subject. I think closer together, the large tube prominent,. and the smaller(?) tube a supporting character, and a slightly out of focus, but identifiable basket would support the main subject.
 

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