One from a Senior Session

Joined
Jul 22, 2008
Messages
5,246
Location
Denver, Colorado
Looks good Brett. The only few nit picks I have would be the fact that her smile looks forced and isn't natural. As well as her left hand is cut off. Also (on my iPhone at least) she seems just a little to dark. A little curves and masking in photoshop would fix that right up!

Great job though. She is very pretty and I love both the colors and the bokeh!
 
Joined
Oct 25, 2009
Messages
306
Location
Victorville
Maybe it's your phone but my MBP it just fine. I know about the hand though, it bothered me two but I only noticed it when I got home.

She wasn't too keen on smiling so this was about as good as it got. She's a lot of fun though.
 
Joined
Jul 22, 2008
Messages
5,246
Location
Denver, Colorado
Maybe it's your phone but my MBP it just fine. I know about the hand though, it bothered me two but I only noticed it when I got home.

She wasn't too keen on smiling so this was about as good as it got. She's a lot of fun though.

Ya, my Macbook looks just fine! And regardless or all those little catches, its a very nice photo.
 
Joined
Jul 15, 2010
Messages
1,490
Location
atlanta
Colors and bokeh look great! sad on the finger chopping. maybe if something else was cropped like an opposite shoulder to provide some type of symmetry perhaps.
 
Joined
Dec 4, 2006
Messages
10,266
Location
Texas!
Nice photo. I think the bokeh is too much. JMHO. I like the smile...it's subtle. The hand doesn't bother me. Good job.
 

Latest posts

Links on this page may be to our affiliates. Sales through affiliate links may benefit this site.
Nikon Cafe is a fan site and not associated with Nikon Corporation.
Forum post reactions by Twemoji: https://github.com/twitter/twemoji
Forum GIFs powered by GIPHY: https://giphy.com/
Copyright © Amin Forums, LLC
Top Bottom