Wow! Well done! The only thing that I would've done differently is to try to keep the eye color the same or similar. But that's just my humble opinion.
Woody's tutorials have helped me tremendously as well. Having a resource like the photo clinic certainly has inspired conficence in my shooting. Kudos to the Cafe for adding it - and to folks like Woody for taking the time to assist those of us (me) who aren't quite as skilled in post-processing techniques.