Peace Maker Shot(comments on bw or ideas) better color??

[mrtac2man]

I tossed this guy in the pool and really thought I should give them a photo .
Trying to make the peace. He was a little ****ed that day..
Think this should make him happy..

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is this better color??

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also this one should help.. how is the b/w conversion
getting closer I think

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[Edrod13]

would this be your daughters boyfriend?

 

[mrtac2man]

No they are a couple of friends of my wifes daughter.. I would really like comments on the b/w conversion..

Thanks Tim

 

[Seneca]

I like the color better...however your color looks really flat. Now why in the heck would you throw him in the pool...I would be upset too.