Peoples

Discussion in 'People' started by e2blade, Jul 27, 2008.

  1. e2blade

    e2blade

    816
    Jul 24, 2008
    Peoria, AZ
    Friends and fam, enjoy, criticize me! :D

    70 200
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    dad-1.jpg
    dad.jpg
    18-135
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    DSC_2190.jpg
    DSC_2488.jpg
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  2. chandler

    chandler

    118
    Oct 21, 2007
    Atlanta, GA
    Nice shots...you captured the emotions well...keep shooting
     
  3. Samer

    Samer

    527
    Sep 19, 2006
    Jupiter, FL
    Okay, you asked for it...

    #1 too much of a low perspective (nostrils), also, why all that space above the head.
    #2 & 3 notice the large difference in warmth. White balance seems inconsistent here.
    #4 left half appears totally blown
    #5 very good, looks like he's about to run something over!
    #6 parking lot background a distraction, looks like the ball is about to knock him in the head, comedic!

    #7 Excellent
    #8 & 9 also very good.

    Cheers
     
  4. e2blade

    e2blade

    816
    Jul 24, 2008
    Peoria, AZ
    hmm i need way more practice with my 70 200 considering i just got it last week haha, but thanks though!
     
  5. nice shooting
    some good advice above
    the colors are off in a few of them

    you did well
    keep shooting
     
  6. My monitor must be really off.
    I am seeing large blotches of color.
    For example:

    CORRECTION: CORRUPTED MONITOR PROFILE, SORRY
     
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