Pink rose, what do you think?

Discussion in 'Macro, Flowers, Insects, and Greenery' started by Firelarz, Jun 17, 2007.

  1. Firelarz

    Firelarz

    Feb 26, 2006
    Chandler, AZ
    This is an image I am going to use for one of my business cards. I just redid the image from the raw file to get to this. What do you think before I proceed?
    Thanks Larz

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  2. Firelarz

    Firelarz

    Feb 26, 2006
    Chandler, AZ
    Or this one with a little curves adjustment?

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  3. Gale

    Gale

    978
    Jan 26, 2005
    Viera Fl
    I like both
     
  4. I hope you do not mind me saying this. Although I like the second one better I actually do think that this can really be improved by taking it again.

    The colour is nice but the texture of the petal is not that good. Concentrate on getting this part sharp and the correct texture and colour. Your point of focus is just slightly forward and this is the main problem and do use spot or centre weighted metering.

    If it is going to be used on a business card then it needs to be spot on and therefore please try again.

    With best wishes.

    Bob F.
     
  5. mrtac2man

    mrtac2man

    Jun 3, 2005
    CT
    I have to agree with Bob.. its a little hot for my liking.. try again..
     
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