Portraits - Meredith and Zach

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My friends, Meredith and Zach, came out one evening for me to get some shots for my portfolio. They drove about 45 minutes to come to our shooting location, and I can't thank them enough!

Anyways, I'm looking for ways to improve the photographs. If you see something wrong with the technical (exposure, focus, etc.) or artistic (framing, posing, etc.), I would be grateful for your input! Thanks!

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The rest of the set can be seen here.

Thanks!

Dan
 
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nice shooting, dan
i like #s 1 and 6 the most
cute folks
nice of them to get involved with your photography
thanks for sharing

as a bit of a critique:
#1 looks far better than #2 to me
better selective DOF
don't like the red line on the ground in #2
and, meredith looks a bit UNcomfortable the way she is posed in #2

in #5... she is a bit too far out of this image to make it pleasing, unless it were printed VERY large

and..... the last one
the shadows of the flash (which, i'm sure you have seen)

nice series
attractive models
well done
 
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Thank again for your comments! I also edited my original post and put up the larger version of this set too.

Dan
 

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