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i've never done a triptych for a wedding series before, but i thought this made for a cute one. i just wanted some confirmation i'm on the right track with this one before the couple sees it.

i appreciate it in advance,
-drew

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Drew,
in my opinion,
the images are in the wrong order
the one on the left belongs in the middle


put the middle one on the left... so that both of them LOOK "IN" at the image of both of them


and.... if you can....
try to clone OUT that light in the image of both of them, that seems to dominate the image
 
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thanks both of you for your replies... i've been up all night working on this wedding so my eyes are tired.

greg, i DID think of that, but think about it this way quick, and see if you still think the same.... right now we have kind of an alternating tux/dress/tux/dress sequence. if i organized it as you suggested there would be lots of tux pushed up together with more tux. i'll give it a try and see what i think
 
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thanks both of you for your replies... i've been up all night working on this wedding so my eyes are tired.

greg, i DID think of that, but think about it this way quick, and see if you still think the same.... right now we have kind of an alternating tux/dress/tux/dress sequence. if i organized it as you suggested there would be lots of tux pushed up together with more tux. i'll give it a try and see what i think
hey drew...
yeah...
i do get that alternating outfit situation...
i hadn't thought of that

it would be nice to see it both ways and see... if you have the time
thanks for your reply
 
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i think you're right greg... i just might like this face-off version better...

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i forewent some of the retouching just to get a sample up quick, a real version would be prettier.
 
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sorry for my late reply/am still seeing patients

i like the FACE-OFF version better, as well
of course... it would be nice to hear from others, as well

glad you took the time to show this one to us
thanks

great shots, by the way... once again
 
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I like the second one better, perhaps you could change the border to adjust for the tux being close to each other.
 

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