starry night

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taken in Venice Beach recently while we were doing the Mud Run (which was bad *** BTW). Wifey trying to look natural.
I like the way the sun was hitting part of the wall giving it more of a night feel (at least to me anyways).


starry night tribute by sektor 11, on Flickr

please C&C! I want to get better!
 
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things I might suggest, in no real order,

her hands are clasped and the way she is leaning don't work for me with the clothes she is wearing,. something more sophisticated in the way of posing might work better, if it was a guy in casual clothes the leaning might be more suitable

the way the shot is cropped through the knees is generally not regarded as a good place to cut through, perhaps full length might work or a vertical tighter shot just below the waist,.

other ideas might be to have her closer to the wall and shoot across the wall but actually the flat shot directly into the wall I think is a good idea I think more could be done with the model, perhaps it's the darker clothing that is not helping her stand out more

great location and idea with the lighting, the above is just random thoughts :smile:
 
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