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Steilacoom Station

Discussion in 'Black and White' started by Minuteman3, Jan 31, 2019.

  1. At one time there was a train stop here in Steilacoom ... but it's been a long time ...
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    Cheers!!

    Ken
     
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  2. I like it
    I like the look and feel

    Cabin
     
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  3. I like this. I wonder how it would look if you cropped 1/3rd off the left and off the bottom. That would really bring attention to the rails and the station house that remains on the right, making both more prominent.
     
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  4. Really nice shot. The random little things, like the bird sitting on the wire on the left, waiting for the train make the image. I hope that was planned- helps the shot a lot.
    I would process it with a little more grit- but that is an opinion- pretty much worthless for a critique.
    I do wish you had a better sky.
    Award winner, nope. But a very nice image that I enjoyed looking at.
    Thanks for sharing
    Gary
     
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  5. A marvellous image, Ken!
    Excellent composition and processing.
    I find it has a look and feel that fits really well with the idea of "a long time ago".
     
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  6. Off into the distance, like time! Wonderful comp and b&w, Ken!
     
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  7. I like Walter's idea of cropping on the left but I wouldn't crop at the bottom. Not for a stronger composition but for a different composition that tells a different story. The current composition nicely conveys a sleepy village whereas the cropped composition conveys focused interest in the rails and station. Both nicely complement the narrative.
     
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  8. Personally, I wouldn't crop this at all. I like the composition just as it is. The rails on the bottom provide strong leading lines. And, I wouldn't want to lose that bird on the left!

    Glenn
     
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  9. I love it as is. The strong shadows of the rails are such a vital part of the scene, and how they disappear into the distance. Love the bird.
     
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  10. Cslucas34

    Cslucas34

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    Oct 8, 2018
    Very nice shot Ken! Love the selection of black and white for this shot, the shadows playing with the rails fits perfectly with it.
     
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