the birdcage

Discussion in 'Formal Portraits and Weddings' started by drdrew, Sep 5, 2008.

  1. Lowolf

    Lowolf

    Jan 26, 2006
    Oregon
    superb what more can one say
     
  2. excellent
    except..... and i've never said anything negative about one of your images before

    the SHAPE of her head is completely misshapen from the focal length of your lens or some other reason
    it just doesn't look flattering at all
    her head is diagonally squashed.... at least to MY eyes

    no offense
    great shot
    but....
    her misshapen head blows it for me
     
  3. drdrew

    drdrew

    Dec 28, 2007
    missouri
    no offense taken! always feel free to post your true opinion, that's why i post! i am sure i used a WA lens here to achieve the stretched out lines on the bottom, and unfortunately it worked on top too! maybe i'll get ambitious and try to correct it...
     
  4. before you correct.... i would try to see what others think
    maybe i'm alone in my thoughts about her head shape
     
  5. hallkc

    hallkc

    303
    Apr 1, 2008
    French Camp, CA
    I agree. Her head was the first thing I noticed, before I read the other comments. Other than that, great lighting, awesome looking photo... :) 
     
  6. Romeo

    Romeo

    449
    May 31, 2008
    TP, IL
    Same here.
     
  7. Vienna Pics

    Vienna Pics

    Nov 14, 2005
    Virgnia
    Pretty bird - don't let her fly away on you!
     
  8. biggstr6

    biggstr6

    Apr 26, 2005
    Richmond,Va
    I noticed the head right Off . And then wrinkle in the cloth on the floor.
     
  9. I was also drawn to the head and it doesn't look quite right. Nice concept and colors.
     
  10. lf911sc

    lf911sc

    71
    Jun 15, 2008
    Monmouth, NJ
    Same here, I noticed the angle and it also seems like her head is too large in proportion to her shoulders and body.
     
  11. leifw

    leifw

    472
    Jul 25, 2007
    Bozeman, MT
    Ditto
     
  12. fyreflie24

    fyreflie24

    896
    Jun 24, 2005
    Charlotte NC
    the tone, styling and composition are outstanding... though I must admit, I was thinking I was going to see Nathan Lane and Robin Williams LOL!!
     
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