Nice, but.... some minor tweaks might help.
1) her hair isn't as grey-streaked as smudged. Makes her look considerably older than she is.
2) Some of the "fantasy eye makeup" with the glitter was lost. I think some of the impact of glitter like this is in having more rather than less. Painting some back in with some hue jitter might "anchor" the eye-corner -- tie it in with the eye, part of the eye-- rather than having it just added on outside the eye.
Just my 2 cents' worth. Overall much better smudge than I could do!