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I like this a lot. Lighting, composition and his pose are all pretty rad. Only thing that bugs me is the loss of detail in the pants, they look like black blobs haha. Maybe try adding a layer mask to fix that.
Aside from what Jordan said, I would also recommend tilting the photo CCW and cropping it. It looks like the camera was tilted with the shot and you can see where the paper touches the ground, so it appears the "horizon" is tilted. This is such a great photo - he is really working the camera!
It's amazing what a difference that little change made. The detail in his pants and the right front shoulder area is way better now. This is a fabulous shot, and he's a natural in front of the camera - he should give you years as a test subject!